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The Black Cat
ΠΠ²ΡΠΎΡ: ΠΡΠΌΠ°ΠΊ ΠΎΡ 20-02-2020, 14:55
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SCP 1923 Π°Π½ΡΡΠΎΠΏΠΎΠΌΠΎΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΡΡΡΠ΅ΡΡΠ²ΠΎ Π²ΠΈΠ·ΡΠ°Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΏΠΎΡ
ΠΎΠΆΠ΅Π΅ Π½Π° ΠΏΠ΅ΡΡΠΎΠ½Π°ΠΆΠ΅ΠΉ ΠΌΡΠ»ΡΡΡΠΈΠ»ΡΠΌΠΎΠ² 20 Π²Π΅ΠΊΠ°
Π ΠΎΡΡ ΠΊΠΎΠ»Π΅Π±Π»Π΅ΡΡΡ ΠΎΡ 3 Π΄ΠΎ 5 ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΠΎΠ². Π’Π΅Π»ΠΎ Π½Π° 90% ΡΠΎΡΡΠΎΠΈΡ ΠΈΠ· ΡΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠΉ Π³ΡΡΡΠΎΠΉ ΠΌΠ°ΡΡΡ. ΠΡΡΠ°Π»ΡΠ½ΡΠ΅ 10% ΡΡΠΎ ΡΠ²Π΅ΡΠ΄ΡΠ΅ ΡΡΠ°ΡΡΠΊΠΈ ΡΠ΅Π»Π°: Π·ΡΠ±Ρ ΠΈ Π»Π°ΠΏΡ.
SCP 1923 ΡΠΏΠΎΡΠΎΠ±Π΅Π½ ΡΠ²Π΅Π»ΠΈΡΠΈΡΡ ΡΠ²ΠΎΠΈ ΠΊΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΠ½ΠΎΡΡΠΈ ΠΈ ΡΠ΅Π»ΠΎ Π² 5 ΡΠ°Π·. Π’ΡΡΠ΄Π½ΠΎ ΠΎΠ±Π½Π°ΡΡΠΆΠΈΡΡ, Π²Π΅Π΄Ρ ΠΏΡΠΈ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠΈ Π½Π΅ ΠΈΠ·Π΄Π°Π΅Ρ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊΠΈΡ Π»ΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π·Π²ΡΠΊΠΎΠ². ΠΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΠΎΠΏΠ°ΡΠ΅Π½ Π²Π²ΠΈΠ΄Ρ ΡΠΊΠ»ΠΎΠ½Π½ΠΎΡΡΠΈ ΠΊ ΡΠ±ΠΈΠΉΡΡΠ²Π°ΠΌ. ΠΡΠ½ΠΎΠ²Π½ΡΠ΅ ΡΠΏΠΎΡΠΎΠ±Ρ ΡΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Π»Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ ΡΠ²Π»ΡΡΡΡΡ ΡΠ΄Π°Π»Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ Π·ΡΠ±ΠΎΠ² ΠΆΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Ρ Ρ ΠΏΠΎΡΠ»Π΅Π΄ΡΡΡΠΈΠΌ ΠΏΠΎΠ΅Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΠ΅ΠΌ ΡΠ΅Π»Π°, Π° ΡΠ°ΠΊ ΠΆΠ΅ Π·Π°ΠΏΠΎΠ»Π½Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ ΡΠ΅Π»Π° ΡΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠΉ ΠΆΠΈΠ΄ΠΊΠΎΡΡΡΡ, ΡΡΠΎ ΠΏΡΠΈΠ²ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΡ ΠΊ ΡΠ²Π΅ΡΡ -ΡΠΈΠ»ΡΠ½ΠΎΠΉ ΠΈΠ½ΡΠΎΠΊΡΠΈΠΊΠ°ΡΠΈΠΈ. ΠΡΠΈ ΠΎΠ±Π½Π°ΡΡΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠΈ ΡΠ΅Π»ΠΎΠ²Π΅ΠΊΠ° SCP Π²ΡΡΠ°ΡΡ Π² ΠΏΠΎΠ·Ρ Π±ΡΠΊΠ²Ρ Π Π½Π° ΠΌΠΈΠ½ΡΡΡ, Π° ΠΏΠΎΡΠ»Π΅ Π°ΡΠ°ΠΊΡΠ΅Ρ. ΠΡΠΈ Π²ΡΡ ΠΎΠ΄Π΅ ΠΆΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Ρ ΠΈΠ· Π·Π΄Π°Π½ΠΈΡ Π½Π°ΡΠΈΠ½Π°Π΅Ρ ΠΏΡΠ΅ΡΠ»Π΅Π΄ΠΎΠ²Π°ΡΡ Π΄ΠΎ ΡΠ΅Ρ ΠΏΠΎΡ, ΠΏΠΎΠΊΠ° Π½Π΅ ΡΠ±ΡΠ΅Ρ, Π»ΠΈΠ±ΠΎ ΠΏΠΎΠΊΠ° ΠΆΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Π° Π½Π΅ ΡΠ΄Π°Π»ΠΈΡΡΡΡ Π±ΠΎΠ»Π΅Π΅ ΡΠ΅ΠΌ Π½Π° 500 ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΠΎΠ². Π Π±Π΅Π·Π΄Π΅ΠΉΡΡΠ²ΡΡΡΠ΅ΠΉ ΡΠ°Π·Π΅ SCP ΠΏΡΠ΅Π΄ΡΡΠ°Π²Π»ΡΠ΅Ρ ΡΠΎΠ±ΠΎΠΉ Π³ΡΠ°ΡΡΠΈΡΠΈ ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ°ΡΡΠ΅Π΅ Π΄ΠΎΠ±ΡΠΎΠ³ΠΎ, ΡΠ»ΡΠ±Π°ΡΡΠ΅Π³ΠΎΡΡ ΠΊΠΎΡΠ° ΠΈΠΌΠ΅Π΅ΡΡΠ΅Π³ΠΎ ΠΏΠΎΠ΄ ΡΠΎΠ±ΠΎΠΉ Π½Π°Π΄ΠΏΠΈΡΡ «That’s all, folks!», ΡΡΠΎ ΠΎΠ·Π½Π°ΡΠ°Π΅Ρ «ΠΠΎΡ ΠΈ Π²ΡΡ, ΡΠ΅Π±ΡΡΠ°!» ΠΠΎΠ·Π° ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ΅Π½Π½ΠΎΠ³ΠΎ ΡΡΡΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Π° ΠΏΠΎΡΡΠΎΡΠ½Π½ΠΎ ΠΌΠ΅Π½ΡΠ΅ΡΡΡ. ΠΠ»Π°Π·Π° Π³ΡΠ°ΡΡΠΈΡΠΈ ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ΅Π½Ρ ΡΠ°ΠΊ, ΡΡΠΎΠ± ΠΎΠ½ΠΈ Π²ΡΠ΅Π³Π΄Π° Π±ΡΠ»ΠΈ ΠΏΠΎΠ²Π΅ΡΠ½ΡΡΡ Π½Π° ΡΠΌΠΎΡΡΡΡΠ΅Π³ΠΎ. ΠΠ° Π΄Π°Π½Π½ΡΠΉ ΠΌΠΎΠΌΠ΅Π½Ρ Π½Π΅ Π±ΡΠ»ΠΎ Π·Π°ΡΠΈΠΊΡΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½ΠΎ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ΅ΠΊΡ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅Ρ ΠΎΠ΄ΠΈΡ ΠΈΠ· ΡΡΠ΅Ρ ΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ³ΠΎ ΡΡΡΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Π° Π² Π΄Π²ΡΡ ΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅.
ΠΡΠΎΡΠΎΠΉ ΡΠ»ΡΡΠ°ΠΉ ΠΏΡΠΎΠΈΠ·ΠΎΡΡΠ» ΡΠΏΡΡΡΡ 2 Π½Π΅Π΄Π΅Π»ΠΈ ΠΏΠΎΡΠ»Π΅ ΡΡΡΠ°Π½ΠΎΠ²ΠΊΠΈ ΠΊΠ°ΠΌΠ΅Ρ.
Π 4 ΡΠ°ΡΠ° ΡΡΡΠ° ΠΏΡΠΎΠΈΠ·ΠΎΡΡΠ» ΡΠΊΠ°ΡΠΎΠΊ Π½Π°ΠΏΡΡΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡ ΠΈ ΠΏΠΎΡΠ»Π΅ Π΅Π³ΠΎ ΡΡΡΡΠ°Π½Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ Π½Π΅ΠΏΠΎΠ»Π°Π΄ΠΎΠΊ ΠΎΡ
ΡΠ°Π½Π½ΠΈΠΊ Π·Π°ΠΌΠ΅ΡΠΈΠ», ΡΡΠΎ ΠΊΠ°ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡ Π±ΡΠ»ΠΈ Π·Π°Π»Π΅ΠΏΠ»Π΅Π½Π½Ρ Π½Π΅ΠΈΠ·Π²Π΅ΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠΉ ΡΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠΉ ΠΆΠΈΠ΄ΠΊΠΎΡΡΡΡ. Π Π΅ΡΠΈΠ² ΠΏΡΠΎΠ²Π΅ΡΠΈΡΡ ΠΎΠ±ΡΡΠ°Π½ΠΎΠ²ΠΊΡ ΠΎΠ½ Π²ΡΡΡΠ΅ΡΠΈΠ» Π² Π³Π»Π°Π²Π½ΠΎΠΌ Π·Π°Π»Π΅ ΡΠΎΡΠ³ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ³ΠΎ ΡΠ΅Π½ΡΡΠ° SCP 1923 ΠΈ Π²Π΅ΡΠΎΡΡΠ½Π΅Π΅ Π²ΡΠ΅Π³ΠΎ, Π±ΡΠ» ΡΠ±ΠΈΡ. ΠΡΠΈΠ±ΡΠ²ΡΠ°Ρ Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏΠ° ΠΠΠΠ ΠΠ-9 Π΄ΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠΆΠΈΠ»Π° ΠΎ ΡΠ»Π΅Π΄Π°Ρ
ΡΠΎΠΏΡΠΎΡΠΈΠ²Π»Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ ΠΈ Π½Π°ΠΉΠ΄Π΅Π½Π½ΠΎΠΉ Π΄ΡΠ±ΠΈΠ½ΠΊΠΈ Ρ ΠΏΠΈΡΡΠΎΠ»Π΅ΡΠΎΠΌ Glock-9 ΠΈΠ·ΠΌΠ°Π·Π°Π½Π½ΠΎΠΉ ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΈΠ»Π°ΠΌΠΈ ΠΈ ΠΊΡΠΎΠ²ΡΡ. Π‘ΠΏΡΡΡΡ ΡΠ°Ρ ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ΅ΠΊΡ Π±ΡΠ» ΠΎΠ±Π½Π°ΡΡΠΆΠ΅Π½ Π² Π½Π΅Π°ΠΊΡΠΈΠ²Π½ΠΎΠΉ ΡΠ°Π·Π΅. ΠΠΎΡΠ»Π΅ ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ΅ΠΊΡ Π½Π΅ ΠΏΡΠ΅Π΄ΠΏΡΠΈΠ½ΠΈΠΌΠ°Π» ΠΏΠΎΠΏΡΡΠΎΠΊ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΠΈΡΡΡΡ Π² Π΄ΡΡΠ³ΠΎΠ΅ ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΠΎ
ΠΡΠΈ ΠΏΡΠΎΠ²Π΅Π΄Π΅Π½ΠΈΠΈ ΠΎΠΏΡΡΠΎΠ² Ρ SCP1923 Π±ΡΠ»ΠΎ Π²ΡΡΠ²Π»Π΅Π½ΠΎ, ΡΡΠΎ ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΈΠ»Π°ΠΌ ΠΏΡΠ΅ΠΊΡΠ°ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΏΡΠΎΡΠΈΠ²ΠΎΡΡΠΎΠΈΡ ΠΆΠΈΠ΄ΠΊΠΈΠΉ Π°Π·ΠΎΡ ΠΏΡΠΈ ΠΌΠΈΠ½ΡΡΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠΉ ΡΠ΅ΠΌΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ°ΡΡΡΠ΅. ΠΡΠΈ Π²Π·Π°ΠΈΠΌΠΎΠ΄Π΅ΠΉΡΡΠ²ΠΈΠΈ Ρ Π°Π·ΠΎΡΠΎΠΌ ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΈΠ»Π° Π½Π°ΡΠΈΠ½Π°ΡΡ ΡΡΠ΅ΡΠΊΠ°ΡΡΡΡ. ΠΠ»Ρ ΡΠΎΠΏΡΠΎΡΠΈΠ²Π»Π΅Π½ΠΈΡ ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ΅ΠΊΡΡ Π±ΡΠ»ΠΎ ΡΠΎΠ·Π΄Π°Π½ΠΎ ΠΎΡΡΠ΄ΠΈΠ΅ ΡΡΡΠ΅Π»ΡΡΡΠΈΠ΅ ΠΆΠΈΠ΄ΠΊΠΈΠΌ Π°Π·ΠΎΡΠΎΠΌ
SCP Foundation
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Okay, here’s another SCP Idea I’ve got in mind, basing it off of one of «unnerving images». Do let me know if there’s something wrong with it (especially with the «incident», because I don’t know if that’s a thing allowed here or not. Nothing over-powered, just the way it happens. (hopefully I didn’t make it too big, and slight gore warning. XP)
Class: Neutralized Keter (due to increased containment precautions. read the incident report for details)
SCP-XXXX is a 2 to 3 meter tall creature with its body composed 95% of a black, liquid-like substance most reminiscent to that of liquid Ink. The only known «solid» form in its anatomy is its teeth, which after study are confirmed to be Human teeth. Its eyes make up 70% of its face, with its mouth consistently grinning. Its arms are twice the length of its legs, and its hands appear outfitted in white gloves as part of the hand.
SCP-XXXX is to be kept in a reinforced containment cell. Any and all interactions with SCP-XXXX are to be monitored throughout the entire duration.
(update) SCP-XXXX’s cell is to be kept under 30 degrees, keeping its body in a more solid state. In case of containment breach, Liquid Nitrogen Fire Extinguishers are to be readily available to be use against SCP-XXXX. all captured specimens are to be kept isolated from each other.
During one of its Containment Breaches which it destroyed its containment cell door, SCP-XXXX was cornered and locked within a boiler room. During this, SCP-XXXX’s liquid body started to boil due to the heat until it boiled away to basically nothing except for the teeth. The foundation labeled it as Neutralized.
However, several months later, sightings of «Cartoon Cats» began to reemerge outside of the Foundation again, only this time the forms are smaller and simpler in appearance compared to the original, curiously after other sightings of «black rain» beforehand. The Foundation hypothesized that the original SCP-XXXX turned into a gas-like substance after boiling away from its liquid state, and somehow managed to break outside the foundation as part of the Water cycle commonly known (the gas bring formed into the clouds, and coming down as rain).
The foundation currently has several specimens of SCP-XXXX in containment (SCP-XXX-A through F), and on high alert for any more possible sightings.
I hope it at least sounds interesting. Let me know what you think, if I missed anything, or if it sounds too generic or over-powered to attempt. Thank you for your time ^^
I’m sorry but i fear you’ve stolen this idea from Trevor Henderson horror character «Cartoon Cat», which dates way back from 2018. Please delete this and have ideas of your own.
Hey would you mind cutting this down a little btw? Per the Ideas Critique forum guidelines:
Keep it short and sweet. Keep concept summaries under 500 words. Reviewers will ask for clarification or additional details as necessary; you want people to be intrigued and interested by the pitch, not overwhelmed or hesitant to even try to read a wall of text.
You’re currently at about 800 words and are kinda, heavily skirting the line between sharing a draft and a concept here.
Okay, I shortened and summarized it some more. Hopefully it’s not as long as before now
Oh, has the Word Count rule been updated? I couldβve sworn it used to be 400
Edit: sorry Zyn, I saw a new post and I thought that this was also a new post as well
[Noting a PM request to review this]
This isβ¦weird. It feels to generically like a standard horror monster for it to really work here; with not quite enough context story to it for me to really be drawn in by it? Tying it in to cartoon cats is a fun angle on paper, but it doesn’t really feel very much like the kind of comparison I’d make from how it’s described and what it does, so I’m not sure it’s like, apparent enough in what you wanna do?
It really feels like this needs more of a story to it to me; like, the horror isn’t quite enough on it’s own I think and there’s not quite enough of the cartoon charm but subverted leaking through for me to dig this as much as I feel like I should?
On some level, I think it’d also be worth really considering why the SCP behaves as it does: it seems to be sapient, or at least potentially capable of being sapient; and so it’s unlikely to just do things without a good reason to. It might also be worth considering why it exists: it’s not something I’d spend a lot of time dwelling on in the article but it might help you figure out the motivation for it?
There is more context to this, but you said I had to shorten it so I removed some of the details ^^; but since you insist, here’s some extra tid-bits on what I had in mind for the Cartoon Cat:
— As suggested by one of the bigger site members for one of my previous ideas, perhaps this fella’s backstory can be a byproduct of Wondertainment? I’m not too familiar with the company personally, but given what articles I’ve read, and what the company is about, Cartoon Cat might fit in well with them as a «barney» esque living cartoon character to entertain children. You know, until its maltreatment as just a toy by other people caused it to grow too bitter and started killing people, finding satisfaction in that instead of «acting like a clown»
— Its habit for taking people’s teeth is more of a necessity for it. To put it simply: it can’t bite or smile without any teeth, and it can’t grow its own so it just takes other people’s teeth. Like a killer tooth fairy x3. As for making people explode from ink β¦ eh, it just finds it easier since its body is made up of liquid ink. Its preferred method of killing because its easier to do.
— It is sapient in a way. I DID consider it being capable of speech and actually having interviews with the staff at a few points, but then I’d have to explain on HOW it can talk and I couldn’t come up with a good enough answer. Unless you think that’s more interesting to include with Cartoon Cat.
There is more context to this, but you said I had to shorten it so I removed some of the details
Yeah, I mean, part of summarising an idea is figuring out what parts are worth keeping and what parts can be safely removed.
Your elaborations here haven’t exactly helped: my big concern is like, what do you actually wanna do with this article here? Like, what’s the story? What’s the narrative conflict? How are you wanting to convey the horror here? Like is there gonna be an extensive backstory section detailing the SCP killing stuff and their fall from grace? Or are you gonna do D-Class testing? Or something else?
It might be worth having a read through a few of these to get a better feel for how to tell a story in a SCP form and like, how to figure out what to do?
Cartoon Cat might fit in well with them as a «barney» esque living cartoon character to entertain children. You know, until its maltreatment as just a toy by other people caused it to grow too bitter and started killing people, finding satisfaction in that instead of «acting like a clown»
Are you actually wanting to explore the fall of Cartoon Cat here as part of the article? At the moment, it feels perhaps a little too dangerous/powerful for Wondertainment to make but??
Its habit for taking people’s teeth is more of a necessity for it. To put it simply: it can’t bite or smile without any teeth, and it can’t grow its own so it just takes other people’s teeth.
Okay but it doesn’t particularly seem like it bites/smiles often so I’m not sure why it takes teeth to allow it to? Like, taking teeth is some super evocative horror shit but at the moment it feels tacked on here?
It is sapient in a way. I DID consider it being capable of speech and actually having interviews with the staff at a few points, but then I’d have to explain on HOW it can talk and I couldn’t come up with a good enough answer
I mean it’s a cartoon character made real? You can just be all «hey it can talk»?
Unless you think that’s more interesting to include with Cartoon Cat.
I mean, it could be an interesting angle depending on what story you wanna tell here.
what do you actually wanna do with this article here? Like, what’s the story? What’s the narrative conflict? How are you wanting to convey the horror here? Like is there gonna be an extensive backstory section detailing the SCP killing stuff and their fall from grace? Or are you gonna do D-Class testing? Or something else?
Are you actually wanting to explore the fall of Cartoon Cat here as part of the article?
Seems like the more decent approach. Of course this is a spur-of-the-moment idea on my part, being the only «children company» of the SCP lore that would remotely make sense here. It makes more sense than some random studio somewhere else just making one out of nowhere, at least. But that’s just me.
it doesn’t particularly seem like it bites/smiles often so I’m not sure why it takes teeth to allow it to? Like, taking teeth is some super evocative horror shit but at the moment it feels tacked on here?